User talk:CreeperExplodeMakesGames14
From Trollpasta Wiki
About your pasta
Trollpastas were more like that back in the day, but in recent years we've been striving for more quality stories that don't overly rely on random memes, cliché's, etc, which your pasta did quite a bit of. Punctuation spam and sections of the story that are incoherent and messy also doesn't make your story funny, just incredibly obnoxious and difficult to read. It also gives your story a bad first impression to readers, since they're probably going to assume it's just spam and go find something else (hence why someone added the delete template to your story).
I hope you understand and strive to make better trollpastas in the future.