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:Pretty much what Niagaranobs said. - [[User:Thermometer|Thermometer]] ([[User talk:Thermometer|talk]]) 17:42, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
:Pretty much what Niagaranobs said. - [[User:Thermometer|Thermometer]] ([[User talk:Thermometer|talk]]) 17:42, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
I been writing a remake of Alf.exe and this time giving it a actual plot and character well at least as much trollpasts goes nothing super serious and makeing it longer [[user:MrFun22]]
I been writing a remake of Alf.exe and this time giving it a actual plot and character well at least as much trollpasts goes nothing super serious and makeing it longer [[user:MrFun22]] (talk)

Revision as of 00:48, 18 April 2024

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More jokes with actual punchlines should be added along with having them be properly executed. You should also avoid using too much dialogue that doesn't really contribute much to the plot or humor, as well as not overly relying on pointless violence for the comedy.

Thermometer (talk) 15:02, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

So it’s best I should look at Some more inspiration and see what story’s are loved and what story’s are hated before making another story? Ps is this the right place to reply? user:MrFun22
Read some stories in the Unfunny category. They're there to show the reader how not to write a trollpasta. Also, read some of Meaty's stories. They're a really good example of how to write a proper funny story. Here's my favorite: Babysitter - Niagaranobs
Pretty much what Niagaranobs said. - Thermometer (talk) 17:42, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

I been writing a remake of Alf.exe and this time giving it a actual plot and character well at least as much trollpasts goes nothing super serious and makeing it longer user:MrFun22 (talk)