User talk:Mrfun22

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More jokes with actual punchlines should be added along with having them be properly executed. You should also avoid using too much dialogue that doesn't really contribute much to the plot or humor, as well as not overly relying on pointless violence for the comedy.

Thermometer (talk) 15:02, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

So it’s best I should look at Some more inspiration and see what story’s are loved and what story’s are hated before making another story? Ps is this the right place to reply? user:MrFun22

Read some stories in the Unfunny category. They're there to show the reader how not to write a trollpasta. Also, read some of Meaty's stories. They're a really good example of how to write a proper funny story. Here's my favorite: Babysitter - Niagaranobs

Pretty much what Niagaranobs said. - Thermometer (talk) 17:42, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

I been writing a remake of Alf.exe and this time giving it a actual plot and character well at least as much as trollpasts goes nothing super serious and making it longer it’s about some fictional corrupt King called King Richard X that’s obsessed with the Alf three is also a part at the the near start making fun of the whole Getting some shady looking thing form a old man for free and being told that’s not how the real world works user:MrFun22